Dante Yoshida

[Dante Yoshida]

Dante Yoshida the basics full name oo Dante Yoshida nickname oo Don or The Don age oo seventeen birthday oo Jan, 13 gender oo male sexuality oo hetero the looks hair oo black, short Afro like eyes oo Black height & weight oo 6'3 & 236 overall looks oo Dante has a small scar on his nose and a large scar on his shoulder, from his many gang wars. He frequently wears a flower pattern dress shirt and sunglasses. He is athletically built, and has a black afro and a chin strap goatee. He is also known for his wide devil-like grin. the personality likes (four plus) - Fighting - Cooking - Spelunking - Crime Dramas dislikes (four plus) - Vacuum - bees - violent winds - staying still strengths (two plus) - monster strength - gentlemen weaknesses (two plus) - hot headed - women dreams (one plus) - to be the most powerfulest fears (one plus) - Koalas overall personality oo Dante is very easy-going, worrying more about what's fun than the effects. Although he easily gets angry, which causes him to get in trouble more than not. He has good fighting instincts, which helps because he is the first to jump into a fight without forethought. Dante is known to have a weakness for women, often putting himself in danger to protect them. But if a woman is as strong as him that just peaks his interest more. Dante has been known to be a loner, not caring about other people, but when some strong or at least someone interesting comes along, he takes notice. He is often loyal to those very few he earns respect for. the ability name oo Smoke control control oo not well trained usage oo can control smoke, dust, fog, and gas to create a shield and smoke screens the history mother oo Carroll Yoshida, age, occupation (if applicable) father oo Hiro Yoshida, 41, occupation (if applicable) overall history oo Dante was know as the demon king in his school, conquering ever gang in his town. He was also know as a ladies man and a womanizer. One day, one of his few rival decided to attack him when he was out with one girlfriends and accidentally punch his girl. Dante's ability active that day and smoke started to come out of his noses and ears. Once he finish walluping the guy, smoke had covered the street. His parent thought he had an unhealthy obsessive with powers and women, so when he found out he had powers his parents sent him to chaser academy. But once he got there he decided they were to boring and left. the role player ooc name oo Dcrazydude experience oo depends on what you mean but lets go with 0 for now

[Sammi]

So, overall you've got all the basic information down. It looks pretty good, but you have quite a lot of spelling errors. I will accept it, but I would appreciate if you could fix that when doing an actual roleplay. I know nobody's perfect, but please try to go over your post and correct any errors before posting. Thank you!

[Chibi Magician]

You've done pretty well there as of listings, but you will have to make the paragraph for appearance larger along with the one for personality.

I will start with nagging about the appearance category. If you add 3 more sentences about his appearance, that will be fine. Maybe describe his body type, facial hair (if he has any), you can even explain where the scar came from if you so please.

Now to nag about personality. Basically, you just need to add more traits. You can still state that he is a womanizer and hot headed, but is he stubborn? Is he actually kind of nice? etc. I recommend using this to find more personality traits for your character. You just need to lengthen your current paragraph so it is about the size of two paragraphs.

Once you finish that, you should be good. You can personal message me or another staff member, yell in chat, or post in the alert thread once you're finished.

[Chibi Magician]

Okay, you're good. Please fill out the claims and then you may begin role-playing. Have fun~!